Assessment 1: learner response
1) Type up your feedback in full (you don't need to write the mark and grade if you want to keep this confidential).
WWW: Matas- A solid first A-level Media assessment. In particular, a strong response for Q2 on social cultural contexts - really close analysis of both unseen products
EBI: Your Q1 was good but not enough examples of analysis from the figure to support your knowledge small point but ensure you reference the right theorist.
Grade: B
Marks: 21/29
Q1- Not enough examples from figure to support knowledge/ Todorov, Barthes, Propp
Q2- Both figures reference shaping peoples lives/ include the figure 1 in shaping lives - British culture
Q3- Wrong theorist right theories, use Blumler and Katz
3) Read this exemplar response from a previous Year 12 (an A grade) - note this was a slightly different paper in terms of the question wording and also had an additional question 4 (we've updated it to better reflect recent exams). Identify at least one potential point for questions 1-3 from this student's paper that you could have mentioned in your assessment.
Q1: Use Barthes
3) Read this exemplar response from a previous Year 12 (an A grade) - note this was a slightly different paper in terms of the question wording and also had an additional question 4 (we've updated it to better reflect recent exams). Identify at least one potential point for questions 1-3 from this student's paper that you could have mentioned in your assessment.
Q1: Use Barthes
Q2: Escaping from their environment to go on tod live better lives
Q3: Halls Reception theory
4) Did you get any media terminology or theory wrong in the assessment? Make a note of it here for future revision, including theories/terminology that you could have used but didn't.
Neale- Repetition and Difference
4) Did you get any media terminology or theory wrong in the assessment? Make a note of it here for future revision, including theories/terminology that you could have used but didn't.
Neale- Repetition and Difference
Abercrombie- Monetary gain
5) Identify your weakest question and write three bullet points that would improve on your original response. Use the mark scheme and exemplar paper to identify these points - particularly focusing on the anticipated content and the top level descriptors.
5) Identify your weakest question and write three bullet points that would improve on your original response. Use the mark scheme and exemplar paper to identify these points - particularly focusing on the anticipated content and the top level descriptors.
- Using as many examples as I can of the theorists like Barthes and Prop
- Explaining the theories more coherently
- Use more media terminology
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